Ugh what a jerk, and what a dick way of delivering a message. Clearly not a writer, at least noit a good one.

As a non-native speaker and woman, I have commenters (always white men) leaving private notes with suggestions in my stories all the time. What I don't understand is why these men think their opinions are relevant. Just get out if you have nothing nice to say!

I've decided not to care and not change a thing, because it might mess up the distribution if you change as much as a comma. Also, if I start stressing over every word I'll stop writing! Writers write, jerks criticize.